more. October 23, 2005
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I know you’re there
Under the same sky
Watching the same stars
Dreaming the same dreams
You can see what I see, feel what I feel
Yet it is not enough
I want more.
I know you’ll always be there
Or so you say
Always there to talk
But words are no substitute for voices, for feelings, for caresses
It is not enough
Want more.
I know you say we’ll always be friends
Friends who talk
Friends who listen
Yet I must share you
And thats the part I hate the most
Friends.
Is not enough
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lol well i got this site off j, i love poetry and the sorts, so i asked him for the site, and i gta say this is really really good stuff!! no kidding
haha im quite a critical reader, so if i didnt like it, with all due respect id say it was ’shit’ lol but its honestly gr8 stuff!!!
i actually write some poetry myself, but i really love your style of writing, and i chose this particular poem to comment on, because funnily enough, its quite scary actually … ur first verse, is literally EXACTLY like one of mine in a poem i wrote a long time ago, maybe with a few differences in word order, but exactly the same message. so nice coincidence
if you have any more poems, id love to have a read! thumbs up – keep writing girl 
hey — thanks for your comments. i love hearing back from people. anyway most of the stuff i write is on this site – i can’t say i’m very regular in updating the site but i do add stuff whenever i have a sudden burst of inspiration
anyway i’d love to read some of your stuff as well so next time j is online i’ll ask him for your address.
here i’m reading your stuff after long time. you write very well! i loved it and “change”. i can so relate to them – its as if you’re speaking my mind.
keep writing them thoughts.